Hiya, told you I'd do it. It was great, you know, that sounds like my big bro, just like him! Nice work.

cowgurlsweetie (Elizabeth)

:( I feel ur pain my BF just broke up with me and yea,,,, sighs wonderful poem! thx so much for r/c on mine

~natalie~

Darien, not that I haven't told you 100 times, but this is great...It brought tears to my eyes! It is great that you can admit that you messed up, yet don't hold on to that regret your whole life. We all make mistakes... Believe me... Keep Ur head up...

XOXO
Kayla

This is really nice, i just had a situation like this too, but he came back before it was too late but it's interesting to see how the feelings are on your side of it...very nice poem...i really liked reading this 5/5

Wow this is a great ex write i can see that u still longed for her buit secretly she did for you to but u had grown so far away telling each other u couldnt do 5/5

This is such a great poem. I absolutely love it! A lot of emotion. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

P.s. I live in Moncton, New brunswick.

I agree with Kristy Darien...that first line was a great way to start of this poem!! And I also agree with Kayla, it is really amazing that you can step up to the plate and say "I messed up"...If you can do that you shouldn't feel guilty. You know of your wrong doings and you know it was wrong. Break ups suck I know and they are so hard to get over. But eventually you will. EVentually something will work out for the best. But that is, "eventually"...for the time being keep your head up and know we are always here for you when you need to release pain or anger, or whatever your feelings may be!
Great Write I really enjoyed that it turned out this way!
Yours truly,
~Chelsey~

I enjoyed this poem, the only possible critism I have is "After you left my soul took a hike." lol that totally threw me off because it was all flowery and beautiful except for that. That being said I throughly enjoyed it and if your prefer that I don't actually offer constructive critism that's cool too, just tell me to stop. Good job! By the way I register just so I could leave you notes! lol Aren't you special?

I really enjoyed reading this poem. so full of detail and it's a greatly written piece. I think you have alot of talent and thanks for reading mine. Always appreciated :)

Hey guess what? I spent all day thinking about something that rhymed with Hike. The best I coudl come up with was "strike" I don't know if that could help you? lol

I love it! it's very moving

I love it! it's very moving

This was a great poem.

-Taylor

Wow, that was good of you, I wish my ex would be able to see how much he hurt me, and that him leaving me is killing me, and I don't know what else to do. I wish the world had eyes like yours. Great poem!

-Mikochan

Excellent write! Beautifully written, great job!

Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy..

Wow nice poem, i guess when it's really love you never get over that person no matter what, in my eyes we all make mistakes and but i can tell you love her. keep up the good work

Wow.

I don't know what else to say except the lines
"She hung on to that cliff for long.
Before I could save her she was gone."
really mean a lot to me.

Thanks for writing this and sharing it.

Darien, Its good to have our memories, but don't ever regret what you've done. You've learned something from the relationship and the breakup. You've found out what love is, not many people do. You've found out how love also hurts. But these are things we all must learn in our lives. So don't ever regret them, learn from them. And one day your twin soul you shall find..... a very heartfelt and moving write. It flowed very well, nicely done sweets.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Remember, we are all here for you if you ever need us....... stay strong, keep on writing.

Oh, wow. i loved this one!!! you know you get a 5 on this one!!!!
**lisa**