Comments : Drowning (Part I)

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun this is amazing as usual, you did an excellent job the poem flowed fantastically, well done my dear, keep it up & take care ,xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow matt1!! im speachless..i honestly cant wait for the other parts...i mean who would miss such work of masterpiece? (wow bad english!!)
    anyway..umm it's crazy how much i can relate to this..hmm.
    Hope to talk to u soon xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Amazing...as always i am amazed by ur poetry! this was so so great, i cant wait for the other parts! keep writing :)
    luv xxemxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Wow....this is simply amazing....i'd write a longer comment, but i'm just about speechless =P....you have amazing talent, man...i'm jealous *cries* lol.....keep up the awesome work =)...i believe you're going on my favorites =)

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    I like this poem, because it is positve, and there are so many of us on this site who have it hard and try to help eachother out. This poem is good that way, because it is encouraging. I really liked it!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by UnWaNtEd

    Hey hunni, gr8 poem...love the emotion...love to hear your opinion on my poems.....loving your work...
    UnWaNtEd

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArStAiNeDfAcE*

    Wow I can totally relate to your poem. Its kind of like when I tried to kill myself that will never go away and it is hard to think that my escape failed. But I know now that there is a high price on my life and I am not ready to die. It is still hard though. I really liked your poem hurry and submit more.
    gabby

  • 18 years ago

    by *puddle ov blak tears*

    5/5 i rekon itz heapz good, can totali understand, a little triky 2 figure out but then again i am pretty dumb...well yeah..hope 2 c da next one

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem. I can't wait to read the rest of it!

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Nicki*~

    This is a really good poem. It makes me think so somethings. It this true about you? Well good job

  • 18 years ago

    by ~lost in memories~

    Hun, that was amazing!!! i can't wait until the rest of the epic comes out, great job!!!

    ~loveloveandmorelove~

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Can't wait to finish!

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I like it...now I'll go over to to part 2 lol...ehem...since it's a long epic...I'll comment fully...when you post them all...but for this...it already is a masterpiece...

  • Thats amazing, i luv it!

  • 18 years ago

    by IhEaRtMaX

    Its beautiful i feel related to it somehow! plz email me! earththrasher19@aol.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    It's more than just a memory,
    Yet smaller than a death,
    Half submerged and lifeless,
    Yet breathing staggered breaths.

    That was such an awe inspiring stanza!!

    this is such a powerful poem! i really enjoyed it. you truly have talent, i hope to see the rest of this epic :D

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    I like it alot its real deep and somehow i feel like we have a connection plz comment an vote mine "depression" and "its my first poem evr -waiting-"
    thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    This is cool as to all your others. keep it up, write more!

  • 18 years ago

    by physco

    Wow that was amazing! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by zadyrose

    Awwwwwwwww that was a fantastic poem it was almost like you were writing about me well keep writeing and ill keep reading you are truely agreat poet