Aw hun this is amazing as usual, you did an excellent job the poem flowed fantastically, well done my dear, keep it up & take care ,xxoo

Wow matt1!! im speachless..i honestly cant wait for the other parts...i mean who would miss such work of masterpiece? (wow bad english!!)
anyway..umm it's crazy how much i can relate to this..hmm.
Hope to talk to u soon xoxoxox

Amazing...as always i am amazed by ur poetry! this was so so great, i cant wait for the other parts! keep writing :)
luv xxemxxx

Wow....this is simply amazing....i'd write a longer comment, but i'm just about speechless =P....you have amazing talent, man...i'm jealous *cries* lol.....keep up the awesome work =)...i believe you're going on my favorites =)

-brittnay- ((5/5))

I like this poem, because it is positve, and there are so many of us on this site who have it hard and try to help eachother out. This poem is good that way, because it is encouraging. I really liked it!

-Mikochan

Hey hunni, gr8 poem...love the emotion...love to hear your opinion on my poems.....loving your work...
UnWaNtEd

Wow I can totally relate to your poem. Its kind of like when I tried to kill myself that will never go away and it is hard to think that my escape failed. But I know now that there is a high price on my life and I am not ready to die. It is still hard though. I really liked your poem hurry and submit more.
gabby

5/5 i rekon itz heapz good, can totali understand, a little triky 2 figure out but then again i am pretty dumb...well yeah..hope 2 c da next one

Great poem. I can't wait to read the rest of it!

Tiffany.xox.

This is a really good poem. It makes me think so somethings. It this true about you? Well good job

Hun, that was amazing!!! i can't wait until the rest of the epic comes out, great job!!!

~loveloveandmorelove~

Can't wait to finish!

-Taylor

I like it...now I'll go over to to part 2 lol...ehem...since it's a long epic...I'll comment fully...when you post them all...but for this...it already is a masterpiece...

Thats amazing, i luv it!

Its beautiful i feel related to it somehow! plz email me! earththrasher19@aol.com

It's more than just a memory,
Yet smaller than a death,
Half submerged and lifeless,
Yet breathing staggered breaths.

That was such an awe inspiring stanza!!

this is such a powerful poem! i really enjoyed it. you truly have talent, i hope to see the rest of this epic :D

xXx

I like it alot its real deep and somehow i feel like we have a connection plz comment an vote mine "depression" and "its my first poem evr -waiting-"
thanks

This is cool as to all your others. keep it up, write more!

Wow that was amazing! 5/5

Awwwwwwwww that was a fantastic poem it was almost like you were writing about me well keep writeing and ill keep reading you are truely agreat poet