Gr8 job hunni.. i can soo relate these days. thnx 4 ur sweet comment.. missed u too. havent bin around 4 some time, coz of skul n things, but im gonna be here more often now coz our winter break is comin up, so...
anywayz, i wrote 3 new *things* wont call em poems, coz they arent reli poems, but some thots..
gr8 job with this poem... rhyme was gud and flow went reli well
will read more of ur stuff asap
take care hun
NannO

I really liked this, alot!

check some of mine out! let me know what you think

That was so good

This is wonderful....I see your still at it. keep up the good work .

your one of my favorite's you know ?

Good poem.. maybe i should try it

Dark and deeply felt. Great write.
-Kate

Good poem ,i think its great and i can relate.

Hey i loved this poem, its something a lot of people can relate to easily and in so many different situations, which is a hard feeling to create in words. i liked the last stanza,

So shutting it out,
Will save me from this pain.
Becoming completely numb,
Will let me win this game.

thanks for all your comments btw, i love your work.

good work, keep goin.

xXx

Fantastico.
Now I hate you, because you write so well. DIE DIE DIE. J/k. I'm joking. Your so good at writing poems, how many contests have you won? God, no wonder you and Jenn are friends, your both so good.

I can deff relate to this poem...keep up the good work..if you wonna talk im here okay girl!! xoxo nelle