The One

by Crystal   Dec 2, 2005


Now that you are in my life
I know there is no one else for me
You are the one I want for all time
You have made my life complete

You are not my first love, but my last
I wouldn't want it any other way
than to have you each and every day
I love you more than words can say!

*Kris, I love you with all my heart and soul. You have changed my life tremendously. You have brought back the joy and happiness I lost as a child.
I LOVE YOU BABY.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    THis is good, it's quiet short but still conveys alot of emotion in it. I'd recommend taking away the exclamation mark at the end cause I think when poems end with this ! it makes them sound less genuine.
    I thought this line stood out in particular 'You are not my first love, but my last' it just makes it sound like you really know what you are saying here, and gives the poem even more feeling. Nice work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by michael

    Wow, thanx for you coment btw~!
    and yeah, u are good at writing poems.. im not good with the rhyming part, unless i do it by accident.. lol, but yeah...
    i could feel how much u love kris!..
    "You are not my first love, but my last"
    and that is sweet!:)
    thanx, ~mickey~

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