"dangerously close to the
edge of madness" love those lines and the ending of falling short! wow love the poem! i don't think i would have been able to come up with a poem that good for that title! great job!

~Jacklyn

Love the wording. Love the message. And loved the form. I mean, it does seem like everything people do really cant be undone. Im always going to remember words said. doesnt make them any more true. Seems like life just sticks us with too many choices. great poem. really liked it.

-courtney
(long time reader, newbie commenter)

Very very clever Holly, it didn't feel forced at all.

Another excellent poem..i love the way u write..ne way keep it up..love Joclyn aka Jocey

I love the flow of this poem and you ended it perfectly, especially loved that part. awesome write! keep up the good work. thanks always for the comments.

Holly ,
I just love this style of poem , and you have done it so well . The choice of title was pure genius .
The flow was incredible because yes it is so hard for this type of poem to flow freely , but you have made it do just that ....
P.S ...I did have to look up the word Indelible first but (shusshh) that is our little secret ..lol ..
Incredible job well done Holly

Holly, simply wonderful. I adore you.

Holly,

Well what can I say, great flow, great diction, great write! Superb.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Holly,
Great message within this piece. Great flow and great job.

Love ya, Ann

Awsome. brilliant work once again!

Nicely penned!!!