Wow, i loved his poem, it was beautiful, and so true. 5/5,
take care,
xxemxxx

Wow you really have talent. x thanx 4 commenting on my poem x

So creative and so beautiful... I'm sorry for your pain... you are such an amazing writer, 5/5

This was deep, I can relate to it. I love the use of night in your poem, it's beautiful.
Great Write, keep it up.
*VioletRaven*

Really great poem huni, i loved it! u r so full of emotion, im sorry you feel this way but hold on hopefully something will go right 2 make life seem not so bad! well im always here 4 u....take care luv maddy