Hello Nitin Bhai,Beautiful poem...True love is blind...keep writing...take care..

Love may be blind
but lovers aren't
It's your love that she needs to find
Money won't get her anywhere, it's not a magical chant...

Great write... very realistic and deep... I love the way u write..

Love,
Ipsita

P.S. as far as I've read your poems-- I don't think you're abnormal.. maybe a little crazy (haha) but not abnormal...
take care..

This 1s really gr8 too and really deep i love it 5/5 keep up teh good work
xox

Heyy Nitin,
thats such sweet n funny poem
Thanks for appreciating my poem

Best
chavii.

I liked it, but the rhyming almost seems......forced? :shrugs: I just felt overwhelmed by rhyme.

other than that, I liked the topic. :)

Ermm..no idea what to say here...pretty deep for me to understand lol...ok...I love the usage of words...it's beautiful...and it's just great...

AMAZING poem. Great job hunni, keep up the great work! =)

Great poem i loved it so much keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!

Oh Nitin,

Breathtaking poem. This is the first time I read this one, and I am speechless. You say you're not a poet, I will say you're not only a poet, but one of the best ones in this site.

I was just wondering after reading this poem, is this the problem you face everyday?

Lots of Love...
Princess

Nitin
What a sad piece. I know it is a love poem. Your sadness is what comes through.

though sometimes i feel so very tired
as if my lady holds the colorful strings
and i am a puppet who has been hired

What a sad and painful stanza.
Excellent job!
Thinking of you dost
Love Cindy