Holy shit.i love it.its so fuc king depressing bu ti love it!gr8 job babe.

Wow. This poem was definately amaing! So powerful and full of emotion. I liked the style you used, nicely done! I found that this poem sent a really good message because it shows that even by accident you could kill yourself due to cutting. I especially liked the lines:

"I heard people cut to get away from their problems.
But didn't they just cause more problems by cutting?"

You are so right. It does cause more problems. Anyways, great poem! Keep it up!

5/5

--Angie xoxo

Wow, this was a very strong and sad poem. I can relate a lot to this poem so I know how it feels. 5/5 Keep up the good work!

Innoc3ntStar

The imagery in this poem is very vivid and gave me a lucid picture on pain. I do hope this is not true, I know you can get through such horror. Please, take care. Seemingly, you are a wonderful writer, it was a pleasure reading such a sorrow filled piece.

Oh my. this was an excellent poem. very deep and full with lots of emotion. great job you did 5/5

~Kristina

This poem was really sad :(
chin up hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

:S really well written thopugh, and i liek that you "died" but were still able to tell the story (k that doesnt really make sense, but whatev) the poem is really good!

Amazing poem,i really likes it