You Were Right

by sillylittlegirl   Dec 3, 2005


Sitting in a crowded room
alive and alone
I thought that you saw me
I guess that I was wrong

you walked right past me
I was beaten and abused
because of you
I was feeling so used

now sitting in a lonely place
alive yet so cold
but it's too late now
my soul has been sold

walking through a dark place
I see a bright light
you told me to stay away from it
but now I know you're right

I really should have listened
I really shouldn't have gone
but now I hope you're happy
you were right and I was wrong

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow, amazing poem darling.

    The flow was amazing, actually flawless. (: You did a wonderful job with it.

    The emotion was outstanding. It made me want to cry, I can honestly ralate to it, one hundred percent. good job.

    amazing word choice as well, it was almost perfect. (:

    keep it up, hun.

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