Their tragic end

by AnorexicDream   Dec 4, 2005


Long I know but please read it all

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She woke up one morning
to find mommy dead
she was covered in her own blood
with a gun by her head

she didn't know if mommy did it to herself
she grabbed the gun to do it too
but then he showed up
she didn't know what to do

he pulled the gun away from her head
and embraced her super tight
as a tear rolled down her cheek
she held it together with all her might

he called the police
they came and took mommy away
they asked her to come
she said no i have to stay

he held her tight
she didn't cry
he looked at her and said
you wont cry why?

she said i have to go to the bathroom
ill be back soon
she was gone for awhile
she left to go there at 10 it was now past noon

he walked in there
to find her on the floor
cutting her wrists over and over again
saying i cant take it anymore

he walked over to her
and took her blade
he hugged her as a tear fell from his eyes
and said my love for you will never fade

she looked up with him
as her eyes filled with tears
she said this is how i cry
dying is no longer one of my fears

he looked up at her
told her everything would be alright
he held her as she cried
he held her with all his might

he loved her more than anything else
they sat there in the bathroom until 3
then he got a call saying he had to go home
she said please don't leave me

she said come over for dinner
mom wants you to
then we can be together
its just dinner nothing new

so they went to dinner
then she went back home
when she got there
she didn't feel alone

his mother said that as long as they were good
that he could spend the night
they laid in bed together
she didn't have a single fright

she felt so loved
she felt a feeling she never had before
then suddenly
she saw a figure at the door

she woke him up
and asked what it was at the door
he said he didn't know
is was something he had never seen before

the figure turned on the light
and said hey its me ren
i heard about your mom
and thought you could use a friend

ren got in bed with her and him
they fell asleep all in a row
then they woke up to a sound
a sound like a crow

She woke up only to find
written on the walls in blood
i killed your mother
love your secret flood

they didn't understand it
but she did
she killed her mother
she was her secret flood

she then took the gun
and to him said
this is the end of our fairytale love
because now I'm dead

she shot the gun
right into her head
then he did it too
he wanted to be dead

he couldn't live with out her
this is the story
of there tragic end

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  • 18 years ago

    by kendra

    Good but i dont understand who ren was and how he/she came into the story but i think it would be better if ren wasnt in the story...
    kendra

    stay strong *hug*

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Awesome. not your best, but still great! i really hope you're doing better hun. take care and stay strong. *hug*
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing babe, very sad but i enjoyed reading it. I thought it was great writing and i love every minute of it. Very tragic i would have to say. But anyway thanks for the comments and always remember i'm here if you need anyone to talk to. I love you with all my heart. keep it up. keep on writing. love you always and forever babe.

  • 18 years ago

    by Narcissism

    Wow..that was really good!!