Wow Nikki! another great poem! I love it, can kind of relate to it too
love court

Wow hun thats sooo good im putting u in my favs, I love all ur poems but that was really powerful 5/5
keep it up

That was excellent! I really love the smooth flow, having a perfect rhythm throughout is hard and not alot of ppl do it, but you did it amazingly... hehe someone's being added to my favourites list;) see you 'round the site. Keep up the great work!

Wow! Wow wow wow! This poem is so fantastic I cannot even explain! 5/5 DEFINITELY!!

Tiffany.xox.

It is a beautiful poem, but so sad.

Nikki ,
I am glad you've found this poem ...the writing in it was absolutly amazing . Sad ...but the poem itself was put together right ....every word seems to just fall into the exact right place.
Great job on this piece Nikki

Nikki
So glad you didn't go through with suicide if you were really thinking it! It was great you turned to God and asked for forgiveness! I loved this poem...the way it started was my fave part as well as this stanza

Born Into Sinfulness
Washed In Holly Blood
Righteousness To Wrongfulness
Sinning Just Because

And the ending was amazing! Great Job Nikki this is my fave poem I've read in a while!!
Love,
~Chelsey`

Holy wow... it goes to the prayer. its sad but the flow and rhymes were perfect. Take care Nikki XXXXX
JL

O.O this poem was the best I have read in a very long time. Extremely good work!!! Keep it up and you'll be a pro.! Though it seems to me you already are.

Such a tear jerker. Bravo, Bravo. Fabulous and depressing. Good combo. 5 Stars....From one Nichole to another (well, actually, it's my middle name) Take Care.

Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy..

Wow, this sounds like some of the poems I have written, along the same idea. This poem was excellent, and really expressive. I felt like I was meeting you when I read it, it was that descriptive. Hold on baby, ending your life doesn't solve anything, I know . . . I tried once. It's not worth it, if there is nothing else to live for then live for the future. If you feel like it read my poem Suicide through someone else's eyes, that says what I am trying too. Good luck baby, i'm be praying for you!

-Mikochan

Wow, i was blown away, it was so well written, so well described. like a real prayer i use to have. i loved it!

Touching and amazing

Great poem, very powerful

That poem was really moving. It flowed and was so easy to read. A true talent

Your a great poet I like your poem alot

I loved it aye...its awesome...shuolda posted it mnths ago...

Wow hun, awesome.
funny that happens sometimes..miraculously just find random poems!!
you're truly gifted though..
And for the content of this, it's truly deep and touching...
chin up sweetie.
much love,
anna
xoxo

Wow.. this is really good...