Behind the blood

by sammy jo   Dec 5, 2005


Behind the blood stands a little
girl,
behide the blood is a hand, of the girl behide the blood,
behide the blood is a knife in the hand, of the girl,
behide the blood, is tears, that come from the knife, in the hand of the girl behind the blood.
behind the blood is a stabb from the tears, that come from the knife in the hand of the girl behind the blood.
behind the blood.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Good job to repetishouse for my taste but Its good

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I like this one to your really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bella

    Aww....sad girl killing herself.

    I think the material you're working on is decent, but you seem to have a certain format that you work with. i suggest maybe trying a new wording, with the same topics?

    look forward to your next poem. keep kickin' some ass, sammeh. see ya at school.

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