Close my eyes, lets dream of suicide.

Oh, wow. So dark and touching (I know that sounded pathetic). All of your stuff that I've read thus far is really great and unusual, so I hope to see more :)

Hi Nicc, you commented on one of my poems and so I got intrigued and began reading your work. I must say Nicc, the imagery is extremely vivid and biting, it definitely grabs a hold of you. But also keep in mind that writing should be something that can take you away from all this. I am a recovering self mutilator, and from experience I can tell you that these kinds of thoughts may look clear now, but try reading your own poems through someone else's eyes, and you can see that these thoughts do not capture your whole. I think you can be an extremely talented writer is you look beyond defining yourself through pain, and start thinking about how much you mean to others. Even kids who you just post one comment to. Thanks for reading, sorry if i got a little preachy. Talk to me sometime.

Thank you all for your comments. i love this poem and im glad you enjoyed it, you can count on me to vote for you

This poem is so amazing. its deep and i agree with Kori about the stanza its sooo deep. i feel like this too...well i used to...my lifes gotten alot better.. thanks for the help in the boaeds..
xoxoCheRRyxoxo

I've felt like this everyday....ur right easier said than done....