Lonely Love

by Falling Up   Dec 7, 2005


Well, i dont know where this poem came from. i was just so bored and the first thing that came to mind i wrote, even tho i thought i was long over the boy i loved. i guess not.. this is one of my cheesier poems haha, but i like it because its so straight forward, and cuts right to the chase.. well, please tell me what u think!
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Why am I so lonely,
When I look up at the sky?
Why am I so lonely,
When I sit at home and cry?
Why am I so lonely?
As I'm walking down the street
Why am I so lonely
Wishing our eyes would never meet?

As I stare up at the sky,
I search longingly for you
Gazing for the perfect star,
Almost touching,
But not reaching
The love so pure and true.

I sit along the window ledge,
tears flow heavily from my eyes
once there was a time
I had you in my arms at night,
Never having to say our goodbyes.

The streets are bare and empty
I walk them late into the night
We used to walk together
Hand in hand we walked,
Our love was all so right.

Some nights I really wish
That I hadnt met you at all
So that when you broke
my heart in pieces
I wouldnt hurt so much
Every time you built me up
Just to let me fall

So I ask myself
Why am I so lonely?
I still dont have a clue
Maybe its because
Im still so in love with you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I liked it, it was really good lol and it wasnt cheesy! And I guess you can say I've felt like that but anyways very good poem, keep up the good work! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 work...luv the ending....ur an excellent writer...or and the one i commented earlier it was supposed 2 b..~*Who Cares?*~ as my signature not the other thing so sry...neway 5/5 again
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job, Great ending, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    LOVE IT! you are an amazing writer, keep but the good work and I'll read more of them!
    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissy barnes

    I've... felt like that... yea... 5/5, i like it