Moon

by Afraid of the Dark   Dec 7, 2005


She was there when you were born,
She is here to stay,
She will watch us in our plight,
The sun keeps her at bay,

For only, the bright hot great sun,
Can keep the moon at bay,
The only time she lives in fear,
Is in his rule all day.

A perfect balance, light and dark,
Fighting for the world,
Ever since that first old day,
That the world was hurled.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    Great poem i thought it was awesome i wouldn't change anything about it

    XXXKayla

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but very refreshing poem. The only thing you could change is that several of the ending words are the same...Day bay..etc. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by JamesP

    Great poem. the only part of it that slightly sounded weird was the part where you said "Is in his rule all day" just a suggestion but putting "of in place of "all" might make it flow better. all just seems to throw off the balance of night day that you are explaining. If you like it use if if not don't just trying to help. Awsome work.

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