My Photosynthesising Friend

by Biscuit   Dec 8, 2005


I have a very clever friend,
His name is Mr Plant
He can do all sorts of clever things
But not like maths or art

If you put him in the ground
He'll stand up straight and tall
He pushes roots into the soil
So that he doesn't fall

He gives me what I need to live
And food for himself as well
I'm glad he isn't in my class
He's brainy, I can tell

He likes to sunbathe in the sun
He soaks up all the light
He breathes just like a human
When I'm in bed at night

(age 13)

*written in science when everyone was asked to write a poem about photosynthesis (everyone elses was P is for...H is for ... !) my teacher was very impressed!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was alright, i liked it, dont get me wrong but science was never my best subject so it didnt seem to catch me that much.
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Hey i like this. its cute and funny. lol. nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Lol thts a good point!! i wrote it in science in year 8, only because we had to write a poem about photosynthesis!! thts probably why its not very deep!! but it does what its supposed to - its a poem about photosynthesis and it rhymes!!! and it inspired me write more, and better!!