Confused

by RadianceInReverse   Dec 8, 2005


Love
So harsh and unfair
i didn't want to tell you
how much i care
but now its too late
as these words i berate
Hate
unforgiving the way i feel
for myself is now deeper than before
Confused
why i live through this strife
i feel like using the knife
i cant stand this way of life
Suicide

Another poem writen in the new format..Please Comment Thanks...Joclyn

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  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very cool poem...This new format that you're writing in is really good....I like to read them...hope to read more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Sad and good. Really like the new format and hope you write more like this.

    ~Matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    O0oh...lol...oh well...it's good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    5/5!!!! Good work. Excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    This is really nice, oh yeah by the way i love yer name. I was gonna name my little girl that but she dies 3 weeks ago. Anyway, amazing poem. 5/5 or course

    Love,Trisha

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