Love by two

by Princess09   Dec 8, 2005


She wasn't popular
And he was new.
They spotted each other,
And sparks flew.

they got together,
and he was cocky.
Flirted with other girls,
And thought she didn't see.

But really she could,
And this killed her soul.
I'm still not sure,
If that was his goal??

They broke up,
And got back together.
This went on,
And I thought it would last forever.

Slowly the year ended,
And she still stuck to him.
Hoping he would change,
And she wouldn't have to feel this way again.
..

12/8/05

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great work, In this part of the poem
    'And this killed her sole.' the sole you have is the bottom part of a shoe. I think you ment soul.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spirit

    Truly i like it but i have a feeling that the writting is a little dty