Great poem. welll well eritten, and imaginitive.

Its an amazing poem. very creative. well done.

Good work, I like the rhyme scheme and it seems like you put a lot of effort into this poem.

Wow you are really good. I can't do dark poems as well as my others, but this one has inspired me to try some more. hehe. Great work!!! I hope to see alot more! :)

Wow, excellent. i loved it!
**lisa**

First of all, I LOVE YOUR ICON! Second, I really like this poem too. It is really different, but not in a bad way. It was very elequent and had a good message at least to me.

-Tainted Mikochan

Nice job. i really enjoyed this keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

Astonishingly original. I liked the idea and general structure here
Well Done
Sondos