Growing too close

by BloodScars   Dec 9, 2005


The shimmer in your eyes
beats down on me like hell
the evil pure within
that sums up what to kill

your innocence deceives me
the pain you cause within
so many people you have hurt so bad
one decision killed me do you really care

tears have fallen cant you see
what you've done is killing me
you capture our hearts
thinking your a great friend
you leave us to our death
i guess is The End

you pulled me apart
loving you to death...
you leave me here
not caring one bit
the fallen words
your gone for good

these bloody moods
you have put me in
you've taken over me
just to break me more
you hold the key
to every emotion
i have ever felt
now you leave me here
broken and almost dead
you last words;
I'm sorry
sorrys not good enough this time

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  • 18 years ago

    by **Ashleigh*Sue**

    This is realli good hun i liked it alot. it has alot of emotion and its so real. lol well its great and keeep it up. love ya always,

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow this like blew me away( hehe i am honored to be the first to comment) i love the way its worded, very interesting and just wow its so good, i know how you feel and i am sorry for that

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*