Wow..Thanks for the comment earlier. You aren't bad yourself. You are actually very good. And about that other girl, she was just being completley idiotic. Who would say : If I don't have 10 comments in a certain amout of time, i know no one cares and I shall die. I just found it prett stupid..Well thank you and right now, I am looking over your stuff.. VERY good :)

Wow..Thanks for the comment earlier. You aren't bad yourself. You are actually very good. And about that other girl, she was just being completley idiotic. Who would say : If I don't have 10 comments in a certain amout of time, i know no one cares and I shall die. I just found it prett stupid..Well thank you and right now, I am looking over your stuff.. VERY good :)

Oops :)

Mona what can I say...I really feel for you when you speak of your dad, because it's happened to someone who doesn't deserve it...you deserve to know your father, and then there's me wishing i didn't know my controlling, disturbed, poor excuse for a father...if i could i would trade you knowing my dad for you knowing yours any day
because i know that just maybe your dad will appreciate what a wonderful, TALENTED daughter he's got and you will both make the most of what you have..............

Hey, ya my parents are goig nthrough divorce, i think ive mentionned this to you before but whatever, its like im not on very good terms with him but at the same time i can relate to your poem...good job -xxx-

Aww huni its so sad:'(
i hope things are ok..nice poem except for one thing i saw..you said 'hold'..at one stage i think it sounds better as held coz u were talking in the past..
just me i duno1?!
take care oxox

Wow, I feel your pain in this! An amazing poem and so honest! I love it!

Wow, really nice poem. I feel so much hatred towards my dad, and reading something as touching as this is just makes me wonder exactly what i am missing. Another poems with a lot of feelings within you. well done Mona you are an amazing poet!! Rosie xXx

The repetition and stuff makes it even sadder, really reallynicely written xxx

Omgsh mona this is so sad. I still love it though. You are 100% amazing and i love you.

I went thru that