Forever

by w!th0utyou   Dec 11, 2005


Plz comment when you are done reading thank you

When i look into your eyes
i seem to get lost
i go to a place
where the best dreams come true

its where we are together
holding hands and kissing
its where we belong
to show our love and affection

candle light dinners
laying under the stars
most romantic night
as he takes me into his arms

nothing can go wrong
everything is so perfect
this thing with me and him
will always be right

for our love is forever
and forever never ends
even in this world
where we live till the very end

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is very cute! I really enjoyed reading it. The only advice I can give you is: Please puncuate! Capitalize your words and such, it just makes it look like you spent more time and effort into writing. It makes me feel all sloppy. But other than that. I loved it. These two stanzas are my favorites:

    candle light dinners
    laying under the stars
    most romantic night
    as he takes me into his arms

    or our love is forever
    and forever never ends
    even in this world
    where we live till the very end

    Great Job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. I can relate. Keep up the good work. I loved this poem. Another five out of five.

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