I love the poem I think it is amazing!!!

Wonderful

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Is really good i love it!!! you are a very talented writter!

Another great piece, I really enjoyed this one. I don't have any constructive criticism as I cannot complain, but my favourite line was:
Dont settle for anything less
If you dream of a glass dont settle for a cup
Well done!

Beautifulll... its very great.. and i love it and it really got me thinking.

Brilliant poem, totally flawless. great structure anf flow and wonderful use of words

That was really good. I liked it a lot! It was very pretty. I only suggest using some commas and periods... because that will give ur poem a rhythm and tell the reader when a sentence is over. And can get the reader more into the poem.

~Megan~

Very nice poem :) easy to relate to... yay for dreaming!! when i wake up, i day dream again, if i'm not dreaming, i'm probably sad :(

Thanks everyone

Great poem.
It seems like you really got out all your feelings.
5/5

That's an exellent poem...good advice too ;p

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Thank you everyone as I said b 4 I really appreciate your support