Short but sweet. You make your point effectively.

Deep shit man, i love it

Great poem, sounds meaninful, dont quite understand it, but im sure you do. 5/5 thanks for commenting on mine :) out of interest whats living in poland like?

mark xxx

I like.. I like... =D

Good job!

Your great, this is just as good as the last one imma put you on my favorites, your poems are usually short or so far they have been and their still amazing because they talk about real things and interesting perspectives 5/5 awesome

Different but still good. Like I said before add punctuation but other then thats its great!!
~~Sweetie

Great meaning and nice rhymes. You could make it longer

Another great one.
Most of your poems are short though, I feel that there could be a lot more added on to it! But hey, if short poems are your thing, I'll let it be, lol.

Tiffany.xox.

Hey that was a good, interesting poem! nicely flows and very understandable! It's short but i still loved it! :)

The flow is wonderful and the 2nd stanza totally reflects how I feel. Love ur work

Juls

Excellent...very deep and kinda scary but totally awasome!! love it 5/5