Hey i really like this poem and that is so true wat u wrote at the end. Good job and keep ritin!
Love shell

You have a good point, outward appearances aren't always what they seem. People can hide a lot of hurt. But I still don't like cutters!

That is so true, amazing poem, amazing message. thanks so much for sharing!

I really liked this one you did an amazing job like you did on all of the others and i can really relate to most of it and thts what makes good poems...ones that have ideas or plots that people can relate to. good job keep up the good work 5/5
xox Kristen xox

Amazing poem. Very well written and i like your style. Your rhyming was flowing and wonderfully done! And your so right, appearances can be decieving. Everyone always thinks that the 'loners' or 'emo kids' *rolls eyes* are the ones who always cut. But your poem show truth, that labels aren't always what the presume to be.

Anyway your poem is amazing, keep up the awesome work! =D 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~

I really like this poem and yes what you said at the end is very true... I'm one of the last people who would look like they would cut or have a lot of pain in their life. I guess I just hide it well. Good poem!
-Sarah

Wow its deep and really good i can relate cause i used to cut harshly like stitches harsh and i hid them all the time and even if ppl wanted to be like me i just shook my head they didn;t know me

That is so true
at or school if your a loner you cut and your a stoner and they dont give you a chance
this poem is saying that even though shes popular she has problems...
great job
xxxx
abby

OMG!! that's so awesome!!! and you're right...people hide in their appearences...it's very sad!!! Not everybody has the perfect life in popularity. They are just hiding!!! I'm so glad you wrote this to show people that message...that's awesome!!! keep it up!! :)

Amazing. Like I have no other words for it! =D Simply amazing! Keep writing...Mabey one day I might be as good as you! :)

Lahv Kayaa

Amazing. Like I have no other words for it! =D Simply amazing! Keep writing...Mabey one day I might be as good as you! :)

Lahv Kayaa

Wow i totally agree with what you are saying. people use all types of disguises. i loved it a lot. keep it up!