Wow! such a wonderful structure, i flowed briliantly. supoib! really interesting and deep as per usual. me love so much! haven't had enough lucyfer poems recently!!!! go write some more.

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Oh my goodness Lu! This poem reminded me of that dream you had about the giant puppet!!!!! ARGH!!! Do you remember that???

This is freaking awesome!!! u SO deserve more than 5!! i think this is my favourite poem among all ur other poems... Great job!!!!

Oooh *shivers* i love it! I hope not all your dreams are like this though my little Turnip :(

Whoa! That was intense, great poem. Very dark and powerful. Rolls of the tongue nicely hah. You've got skills

How do you do it? Damit you're too amazing lucy!!! I don't think I can say anything about it except I'm still in awe. Keep writing them though girl, we haven't enough...