This is good, hope u're ok

Lol aww huni:'( i was in the same position and it sucks i agree!!
hope you're ok huni, it's just gonna take time.
love lots xoxo

This is gd hun i hope your ok.

It's not entirely that good. The end just didn't have the flow that the others did. It was okay though.
~DFTI

Um...was there a change? But yeah it does have a better sound.
"Questioning you safety"
I think you left out your. It sounds better this time though.
~DFTI

Aww sorry to hear that! :-( Good luck hun and good write!

I felt this poem was emotionally brilliant and enjoyable through a sense of understanding.. Thank you also for looking at one of my poems, I only joined today so it was lovely to see someone noticed that I was existent lol.

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That always happened to me. They treat you like shit, and all you want is to talk to them, make sure they're feeling okay when they've just walked all over you.
Thanks for the comment on my poem, really made me smile.

Lv A, x

It was pretty decent. You could feel the emotions but I've read too many poems about knives even when they're all based on true stories.

I won't say I know how you feel because nobody can exactly know but I was hurt by my first bf to the point where I was told to think about pressing charges and it effected alot of things.