Wow, excellent poem. uv expressed the disguise theme really well, i can relate. 5/5,
take care,
xxEmmaxx

I loved your poem. I can really relate. I rated your poem a 5. I wish when you can read my poems and tell me what you think I think you should read Cursed to Live becasue it is goes along with this poem. Again I did really like this poem

The ending was kinda predictable but I liked the rest. Actually I liked it so much that even if you ended with "crap crap crap crap" or something like that I'd probably still give you a 5. :)

Hey I just want to say EXCELLENT job..I love it and i can REALLY relate to it..Very good

5/5

You are really talented.
Keep writing.

Added to favourites.

Very nice job you've done there in writing that - it seems like me almost except I'm not girl and I sometimes let my emotions slip. Well done and I hope things get better for you. =)

LOVE THE REPITITION!! im a sucker for that lol it just pulls me right it and yor flow was just about PERFECT lol i love it! thanks alot for the critiques...5/5 great job

Wonderful poem.... i really liked it. Kinda reminds me of myself. Great Job

This girl is me too. I can relate completely. and i love it. It's absolutely amazing.

:o I am stunned. Speachless...

...in a good way:)

This poem has left me speechless. I love it. 5/5
=Kat=