Comments : Depression:Chapter II

  • 18 years ago

    by Delanea

    Wow i loved it it really express how you feel but just to let you know he is not worth it if he doesnt want to be with you forget him i know its hard but one day you will be over him and he is going to come back trying to be with you and you aint going to want him any more!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I lost 3 more pounds,
    First it was six,
    Now its 9,
    When will the pain go away?
    Will I ever be fine?

    Hunni, don't you ever change. You are beautiful the way you are, don't let any one else tell you different. Great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    "I had to finally realize that
    this it the end and we will never be
    I hope i don't try anything else
    Just to take away the pain
    just because your in love with someone new and you
    rather be with her than me!!! " Wow, so true and yet sad and beautful, i love this one my dear, you are an excellent writer great work, keep on writing,

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe omg I can totally relate and I absolutely

  • 18 years ago

    by Delanea

    I think that this poem was really good!