The sad water

by unstated affinity   Dec 12, 2005


Dip my finger into the sea
desperate to break the wild night
cold and smooth
form a glee
stay,linger , and die
immature torrents
crawling high, sobbing
brought the voice of..
reason.....
from the past
purple dream
the speecless eye
killing lonely
soundless movement
a cup of gloom
hiding peacefully
the dark sad water...
it just not enough
to make me
cry......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Very very deep! As deep as the sea perhaps?!! Very well written, great descriptive ideas - the flow was also excellent.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, how did you learn to write as good as this? that was very uniqe.
    you described everything wonderfully.
    much love and happiness,
    marjan

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