You tell Me

by The Awaken One----Josh   Dec 13, 2005


You tell me I cannot love a monster,
But I will love who my heart tells me to.
You tell me it cannot be so,
But you only encourage me more.
You tell me to turn away,
But you make me only want to look more.
You tell me you have so much hidden,
But why won't you show me.
You tell me you don't want to hurt me,
But you cannot hurt me.
You tell me you don't want to take the risk,
But to have something you have to take a risk.
You tell me this, Why can't it be so?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayd

    I love this! It may be short, and may not be perfect to many, but it's true and perfect as anything can get. Keep it up, I'm loving your work!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I liked the ideas in this annd the structures ok, but i think the actually organsation of the writtin gcould be improved. dont get me wrong it's good but it could be better

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