Sundown

by the middle   Dec 13, 2005


The sun is going down now,
on my final day.
and I'm wondering if I've done it right,
was there a better way?

did i treat my friends well enough?
did i do the best i could?
did i smile enough, did i cry enough?
did i try as hard as i should?

were my days spent in vain?
did i waste my time?
is this how it will all end?
with the sunset in it's prime.

did i do all i was meant to do?
should i be proud of all the things I've said?
should i apologies for my mistakes?
or let them be forgotten instead?

will i be remembered as a let-down?
or a friend to break the fall?
will i be remembered as anyones hero?
will i be remembered at all?

the sun's below the horizon now,
the darkness of my last day is getting deep.
and i hope for answers to my last questions,
as i close my eyes for my final sleep.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow...awesome poem hun, (but i DONT like it!!:P)
    um dont think it belogns here tho..sad poems i think.
    Dont ever give up because u're my angel, my light. God hun i wana hug u so bad!!
    love u heaps xoxo