Comments : Take Me Back To August

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Oh my this is sad, hun I hope you're doing okay these poems are really dark and sad aw, but theyre beautiful though, You have an amazing gift for writing exquisite poetry, cannot wait to read moree my dear, keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    :'(
    aww mat..this is really..obviously.
    Great wording, well great poem as usual,.
    i really hope you're ok..
    i'll smile if u do:)
    xoxoxo

    -anna:P

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oh that was so so sad, but incredibly written, really deep and full of emotion. portrays the wish to try and go back to the past really well. excellent.
    take care,
    xxEmmaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    All i can say is WOW 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Beautiful poem, so emotional!! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's good, it just got me crying, well, maybe it did, I was thinking of something, but still, I cried, hey about those poems that has so manypartS, I fear I might have to come back and read them later, cause pretty mess up with everything right now, sorry lol. will try to read them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, this only was incredible. I wish the same about some poeple in my life, funny how that is. You have such a big heart and sweet love for those in your life that is shown through your poems. You are a beautiful writer. 5/5! btw, how is your girlfriend doing? You mentioned to me a while ago that you just found out that she cuts, and yeah I was just wondering how things were going for you guys. Best of luck to you and enjoy the Holidays!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Very sad..isit true? i feel for you...its real deep.
    :)
    xxx
    plz try coment myn 2
    mezkenzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Matt,

    This poem is stunning, your diction and form are wonderful! I dunno how you did it but with this one poem... I'll be keeping an eye on you! lol

    I'd like to thankyou for the comment you left for me on This black marks upon my soul, that is one of the sweetest comments Ive ever gotten. Thankyou for the honor of a place on your favs =D w00t- does a happy dance- lol I hope you keep writing you have a great nack for words hunny =)

    Love always
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This is a beautiful poem, though it is dark and sad, it portrays the honourable wishes you have. If only we could go back and change the past... and yet we must move on from it, even when it is hard, and especially when we don't want to.
    Best Wishes
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Porton

    This is amazing. I got chills when I read this. I'm so sorry if this is true. Keep writing and stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Keep writing because you are AMAZING at it. I loved it! Take Care
    xoxo
    Megan