Sleep...forever

by Bloodedroses   Dec 15, 2005


As you sleep
You slip into dreams
Where nothing is what is seems
And as your breath becomes shallow
You will hear a voice that says "Open up and Swallow"
Willingly you will oblige...
And I shall see the light leave your eyes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by rene

    To be honest i actually found that funny i dont know why i liked it alot it was very deep but i just laugh when i finshed it. im not being mean or anything but yeah that just what i tought :)

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet surprise

    Aww..this is good! thnx for your comment! yea the guy is mean but ill always love him! but thnx for your comment! it means alot!! you should email me sometime! mine is tnkrbllbelevs32@aol.com

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet surprise

    Wow that really deep and really good! ur talented! i wrote a poem its called "Letting Go" could you chk it out and give me some feedback? thnx!

    *KaLiN*

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted~transistor

    Heyy.. sorry im commenting again but i duno hwo to send u a message..
    i wrote another poem.. its called "he killed her" plz read and tell me what u think :P

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted~transistor

    Wow
    that is a really good poem
    ur good at writing..
    keep it up :P
    ~*~Me~*~

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