Comments : Would you save me?

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda S

    OMG I LOVE THIS POEM ITS BEAUTIFUL

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Spectacular poem! I liked the repeating questions and the ending the best. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    Wow a great poem. All your poems are great. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    This is a touching and wonderful poem it has a very great meaningful feeling to it:)

    nice job

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    WOW. I love your poems they have to much emotion and there all wonderful. Keep writting i love to read them,
    Love ya, tornangel

  • 18 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Hmm..it's been a tad bit long since we've talked. But of course, you found a way to pull me into one of your poems. time doesnt change that. Ian

  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Very well done..... i'm going to send this to my fiance if you done mind .... it will be in quotations i promise :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    Utterly beautiful and yet.. so sad. It's been awhile blush. ^_^x

  • 17 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    Utterly beautiful and yet.. so sad. It's been awhile blush. ^_^x