Loneliness

by MaSkEdSoUl   Dec 16, 2005


Today,
I Cried,
Cried Of All The Loneliness I Feel,
The Loneliness Of My Heart,
My Heart Feels Incomplete,
It Feels Empty,
Like The Lights Are Turned Off.
And In Order To Turn The Lights On,
I Need Someone To Love Me,
Someone To Care About Me,
Someone To Make Me Feel Good About Myself,
To Let Me Know Lifes Worth Living.
I Just Hope, That That Special Person Is Getting Here Sooner......Rather Than Later.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really liked this poem, the only thing I didnt like about it was the feeling that this person couldnt go on without finding someone to be with that kinda thing always bugs me (sorry must be the feminest in me). But I liked the title and I liked the use of metaphores. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I adore that ending...so beautiful..intense and moving.
    I thought the opening was powerful, it really pulls you into the poem.
    Flow was good throughout the poem.
    The only thing I didn't like was all the caps.

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