Comments : Till My Final Breath

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    It's very sweet!! Very nice flow!!! The ending was great!! Great job, keep writing!! And thanks for my comment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Great poem...you have lots of talent. 5/5 Keep it up and thank you so much for your sweet comment on mine. Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Lovely Poem very well versed, indeed you have lots of talent. Keep it up, hope to read more soon 5/5 for this great poem & thanks for commenting on mine!

    Take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    How the hell i never read this one...damn did i went blind or something??
    this is so amazing

    Looking back, I see the road
    I find myself in no where
    I see loneliness ahead of me and emptiness behind
    With tears in my eyes I realize
    Your love is the only thing worth life and death
    And I will always love you till my final breath

    wow....this is just so excellent...mind blowing.
    kya khane ke baad likhte ho...lol

    take care and all the best