That was really good Steph... I don't know where you get your ideas from, but wow... And thanks for helping me with my first poem, haha I put you through hell didn't I ? I know you don't do that kinda stuff, which is why I really appreciate it. Much love.

Hey great concept to be honest when i read it, i perceived it as someone who was trying to be a different person to please others and never had a chance to be themselves. I kinda wrote one with that concept, and the concept of having to grow up too fast and losing your childhood (the Mirror and I). But anyway great rhyme, rhythm and read, take care, read again soon,
Alain
5/5

Heyy great write.. as im reading your poems they all have a deeper meaning to it.. like a mystery sorta.. like theres more behind the story or poem lol am i making sense well this is all in my opinion loved this poem! =) great work

--emotionless19

Great poem, the idea of using a reflection is brilliant and works really well.

well done. 5/5

Wow this was really good....i luvd every part of this poem..u have a gift i can tell by just this poem..keep up the gr8 work...5/5

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Great poem..
Good up the good work =]

Wow im in love with this poem i really understand great!!!!!!!!!!!!!5/5

Understood it clearly and liked it too.
though i dont think i write as good as u do..but there seems to be some chemistry here...as we both hv certain same feelings in our poems or may be i m feeling that way.

well very nicely written.....i really love sad/dark poems & even i m not depressed.. :o)

take care and all the best

Wow what an extrodinary ending built with so much emotion. I must say you have a very good way of ending your poems. I feel that the ending is the most important part because it is what is read last and you seem to end yours so perfect everytime

Gr8 work i cood sence emotion in this work...wunderful work
5/5
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Hey, great poem. congrats on getting 1st in my contest.

I am glad you arent depressed
you did a good job of captureing the emotion
i really liked this poem