Released (Actual Love Poem)

by Michael   Dec 17, 2005


This world
complex
misleading
hopeless.

It seems that I can no longer be safe
feel alone
letting the shadows
of the past
creep to me.

I seem to cover myself,
more liked stitched
my sight from the happiness
and joy of the world.
Bewildered in my actions,
never seeming to stop sadness,
I seemed lost forever...

...that is until you came...

You came
and removed my stitches
seeing you
was a miracle.

Your eyes seemed to hypnotize me
within a trance
bringing me to heaven.

Your kindness matched with your appearance
were best fit
as "perfect."
No angel
nor god
can withstand it
nor be you.

The sun now bows low to the ground
while the moon raises it's head
in your glory.
Flowers bloom
by only your presence
and bring happiness to others
such as me.

I dare not speak
to you
for me being so imperfect.

But I'm glad
that you made me realize
life is happiness on your choices
and I thank you for releasing me
like a bird from it's shell
from the stitches from life.

Now
I finally say what I wanted to say
since my eyes met

~ ~ ~I love you~ ~ ~

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  • 18 years ago

    by leah

    Words can never explain. simply to perfect 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by leah

    Words can never explain. simply to perfect 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    "I dare not speak
    to you
    for me being so imperfect."

    My bf does that, but I want to hear what he has to say. The one you love seems perect, but remember you're probably just as perfect in his eyes.

    This love poem is wonderful. I mean absolutely beautiful.

    I'm glad you found someone. :)

    Take care, hon.

    blush
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Wow! It's really beautiful! Nice job! Good luck with the love :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    Yes this is an actual love poem for my bf!

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