Wooow! great poem.. it's really deep.. I love it, understand what you're writing about, you are really talented! read some of my poems and let me know what you think, Take care, xx

This is astounding and i love the concept. its so effective. i love these two lines:
Darkness pulls the edges
And breaks your masquerade

stef/xx

Ah wow...graphic...Avellana you are an amazing writer and I always love your poems. This one gave me shivers. Great as always.

This has to be one of my favorite poems. I loved the wording and the visual. It's amazing, 5/5 none to less.

xx: *> : PainOfOne

Omg..one of the best poems i have ever read. Hun u r on my favs...two poems and im sucked in by the truth and pain u show through ur poems that i can relate to all too well.
Take care of urself xxx

So sad chickadee.. really sad but i completely understand what you mean. I really really liked this poem. Written really well! keep it up. Lots of love xox

Ok wow. u r actually like the best writer on this thing!
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Faltered starting off, but picked up from the second stanza with an energy it carried to the very end.

Hey gurl.

Keep up teh good work its getting better by the hun and i will help you through your rough times.

I love the way it seems so dark and mysterious, and then you indentify it with the reader at the end by mentioning the girl freshen up her makeup.

and yeh, i know i already commented, but that was along time ago, and i enjoyed it again.

x