Awe i really like this is was so true to the heart.. very nice job... keep it up!

sammie

Aww... i really like this one...

Hey, I really liked this one to...

This was a very beautiful...on some parts you kinda wondered off ur rhym scheem, but poems aren't all about rhyme. this is feelings, and theres no wrong or right about the way u feel :) This poem was beautiful, like i said, so i decided to give u 5/5

I can relate to this poem so much!! Especially the first stanza. you have no idea.. I am really missing someone right now, and it's so hard. Fantastic job.

Tiffany.xox.

Such a true poem. It was full of emotion and straight from the heart. Very good - keep up the good work! :)

Aww it sounds like your really in love!! Great work. I really seem to love all of your poems. Lots of love Ashley

Wow i can relate so well..5/5 great poem i loved it

Beatiful work, this poem was a very heartfelt poem.

Beautiful imagery.

Lissa

Awww I really loved this poem. I feel the same way about someone right now, and we just fought. I'm hoping I don't lose him. Your poems touch me in many ways (especially this one) in which I can't explain...So I will leave you with one line:

You are now on my favorites.

Keep it up! 5/5

Not one of your best.. it was still good, dont get me wrong, but it kinda lost the flow it had goin twards the end... but like i said, still good.. keep it up

Love it!!! Keep Writing.