Excellent poem!! 5/5 forsure. I can really relate to this. Fantastic job.

Tiffany.xox.

No one suffers alone, well they shouldn't. Great poem. Keep it up!

Really good poem... I like it alot... I can relate to it.... Great write

I like it, has an offset flow, like a quick song. Well done.

You do a great job conveying your emotions in the words of this poem. I'm right on the same page. Good work, keep it up!

Very touching. I too can understand the silent suffering. I would recommend that you break it up into stanza's, but it is beautiful. The flow is great....

--Sher

I like the rhythm. It all fits together nicely. And the thing about stanzas - it's all up to you. Do you feel your poem would be better broken up into smaller parts?

Personally I like your poem the way it is.

Flows very well and kind of pulls you in. very well written, and bascly a brilliant peice of writting

Ur writing is amazing, that was such a powerful poem, i could relate. 5/5,
xxEmmaxx

Really like your poem a lot I can really relate to it. like all of your poems keep up the good work 5/5

I love this poem also you write so beautifull y, very nice job. keep your pencil going very good. xoxo Rachel

This is so sad,,, i can feel the emostions coming through,, very well writin,,

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Very sad...somewhat deep...and the best part is the flow! it goes along so well 5/5

A sad and emotional poem, something i can releate to, it's really really well written.
love Tara

Gr8 work....i luv ur work...excellent poem! 5/5!

~*Who Cares?*~

That was beautiful i really loved it. nice flow and great meaning. i really enjoyed it. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

That was Awsome and I really liked it, even though I'm not really into that kind of writing style. You are really talented. Keep it up. *5/5*

Wow that was awesome, so strong and true it painted a pic, u have an icredable talent

Its funny but you submitted this one on my b day

i l0ve this p0em it is s0 g00d
great job

love always
tabby

Awe. my gosh. this is depressing. but i like it. alot. and i can relate 111%.