Comments : Forgive the world..

  • 15 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    This poem is so awsum! i was so excited to see another of your wonderful writes! you've done so well with this one. you had my eyes glued to the screen the whole time! great job!
    luv em

  • 15 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I couldn't agree more... this is a terrific and meaningful poem. I love reading your work, so I hope you continue writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cameron

    Hey, babe i love the poem you can really write you inspire me. Holla at me i am Cameron in the fishbowl.

  • 14 years ago

    by amber

    Great poem. . .it's true. . .seems like new things are happening every day that we can't control . . .great poem 5/5 hollar at me sometime and give me some advice or something on my poems. . .it would mean alot. . .great poem. . .it was brilliant how you made all the rhymes rhyme with the ending "ation" and stuff. ..it was great
    good job
    thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 14 years ago

    by Kylie

    This is an excellent poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Erin

    Amazingggg i wish i was as good at you.... ive read all of ur poems they are amazing ... your going to be famous with ur writing

  • 13 years ago

    by Kitsune

    I really like this one. For sure, keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Star

    Absolutely AMAZING! Talk about talent! People should be bowing to you. 5/5 from me.

  • 13 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    This is my favorite poem out of any I've read. I've read it many times over and over. I love it. I never knew that I never commented it, but better late than never right? of course 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Hey Dani, remember me? hehehe

    This was an excellent read and I sure missed rading your work! Well balanced and smooth, a very comfortable and informative read. Hehehe, I've always liked your style.

    Keep it up baby! Great stuff!

    - Thuggy!

  • 13 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Hey Dani, remember me? hehehe

    This was an excellent read and I sure missed rading your work! Well balanced and smooth, a very comfortable and informative read. Hehehe, I've always liked your style.

    Keep it up baby! Great stuff!

    - Thuggy!

  • 13 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Hey Dani, remember me? hehehe

    This was an excellent read and I sure missed rading your work! Well balanced and smooth, a very comfortable and informative read. Hehehe, I've always liked your style.

    Keep it up baby! Great stuff!

    - Thuggy!

  • 12 years ago

    by Star

    That was an absolutely amazing and beautiful piece. 5/5