Wow, another excellent poem love. Really a nice job. Your diction was elequent and so was the flow of your poem. You had a message and presented it beautifully. I really loved this one a lot! GREAT JOB HUN!!!

-Tainted Mikochan

Meaningful message, deep and concise. Beautifully written :)

Wow great poem Nikki!! I've been checking my favourites daily and you put up another one *yay* great job... luving your work
~hugs~
court

Brilliant, foreboding and sad....what a great poem.

I loved it huni, u r so talented!! this poem was beautifully written! i wish i was as good! darlinG im alwayz ere 4 u **friendz 4 lyf** luv ya bub xxx

Very powerful write Nikki.... its so sad but projects a strong message.... once again you've written a beautiful masterpiece.....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Hope all is well with you... Merry Christmas, may God bless you and your family with love, health, happiness and peace..... Love ya girly.

Wow i love it i wish i could write like you!! I would really apriciate it if you could read some of mine. i would really like your adivice.

Beautiful....sad and beautiful. Happy Holidays Nikki. Take care XXXXX
JL

Brilliant poem, so well expressed and effectivly written

5/5

Aww that was amazing i love reading every poem by you it was excellent and you're a amazing poet

Awesome
totally loved it
keep up the good work
peace out xxxxx