A boy who cared

by cayce   Dec 20, 2005


I promised i\'d always be there and you said nothing could tear us apart but when we seperated so did our hearts....i know you love me and still feel that way. You promised you would never change but as time goes by i wonder how it got this way....i dont want to say goodbye but it has to end this way.... as a tear streams down my face.....i think of you and how much passion was in your kiss....i would why i always reminise? i can\'t forget all the things we\'ve been through.....i still have that kiss. wishing i could hold you one last time...i thought this would last.

*unfinished i still have to work on it *

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sophia lokkdupthoughts

    This is very nice!
    i kan relate...
    keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    I didnt read it...because somehow your poems dont seem to interest me...From now on, if you read my poems and dont like them..Dont comment on them..Because I really dont care to hear your rude comments. Thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    Great poem, make the next one soon! And about your comment on my poem titled "Follow" I have told my friend already, but I am respecting the wishes of her and her boyfriend by not naming them and by not putting my poems in the love catergory.
    Awesome poem. Don't add to this because eventually people will stop going to it, make a part 2 instead.

  • 18 years ago

    by anastasia

    Msybr just the end part but that about it i really liek it alot

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