Lost

by black_hearted_lover   Dec 21, 2005


She sits with a blank stare
and her empty heart
everybody left her
pretty soon the tears start

and her empty heart
she has nothing to do
pretty soon the tears start
no one cares

she has nothing to so
her thoughts are wacked
no one cares
does she pull the trigger

she sits with a blank stare
she has nothing to do
no one cres
does she pull the trigger

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  • 10 years ago

    by Jawwad Zafar

    Wow! excellent work

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    This poem is different from what I have read but its very sad and emotional. I do like the repeating lines. and the flow was nice as well. I don't love how ever how you started out rhyming and stopped. otherwise nice read 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    WoW. i love you girl i really like this sooo much!! i just hope that you write more!! i have i new one out so yeah love ya lots

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