Shadow(not done)

by Bound, Gagged, and Blindfolded   Dec 22, 2005


I sit here in this lonely place..
Feeling like maybe i just need some space.
As i sit here all alone.
My body goes numb, so cold..my skinf eels like stone
As i begin to look around
I soon realize what i had found.
Everything just started to move just too fast..
It was my regret, my pain, it was just my past.
As i sit here all alone.. i begin to think..
Of our very first day..at that old hockey rink.
I remember the first time i looked deep into your eyes..
It kills me to think about it, each time i do,everything in me dies
I cant bare this feeling..
It makes me feel like my skin is peeling.
Day after day..night after night..
i pray and i pray that you would just get out of my mind..my life with all of my might.
This is the end..
Seems like it's just the trend.
You just left me there tattered..
how in the right mind can you sit there..flattered

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Ver ygood. it flows well and matains momentum thoughout. also full of feeling.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Coreyy...That was good. I liked the emotion you put into it as well as the flow. I liked how you stated your feelings and what she is doing and feeling..Nice work.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

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