Fallen angel

by bilal   Dec 22, 2005


Staring from afar
Trembling with every step
Closer and closer
Lips lushes red
Hair silky black
Eyes a mesmerizing green controlling my every move
Closer and closer
Body of rolling hills
Asking my name with the voice of a fallen angel
I try to answer
Nevertheless, fail to find the courage to speak
Soft green eyes penetrating my sole searching for an answer
Gripping my hand and taking me to her layer with the beauty and grace of a she devil
As I had become overtaken by emotion

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  • 14 years ago

    by Siham

    Wooow !!! that's really wondeful job
    well done plz keep up & i am waiting for more love poems cuz u're really telented
    May God bless

  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    Thanks for the comment!
    This is a good poem!
    I really like it!
    Your choice of words made me visualize or picture it!
    Nice!
    Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Great word choice and I loved how you painted a picture in my head....plus your title of your poem is my nick-name.... Thanks for the comment... I always return the favor.

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