Sorry didnt mean to do that twice only counts as one

Awwwww... i definitely know how you feel... feel free to read my poems as well. also, if you ever need anyone to listen, i'm here for ya... don't forget.. ok ?

lots of love and hugs,
michelle

It's really brillant love, I am glad you found an angel in your life that's really great. Everyone deserves a special person in their lives and I am so happy that your angel was able to come and save you. It is really an amazing feeling to have someone who cares about you that much. Nice poem love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Touching...

Lissa

:) I wish I knew How it felt... Again..
I was the same... Clinging by a hand only by him, This Life I could Substand :(
But now he's gone, My life's a waste...
What should I do...
My Heart With Disgrace...

By the way, Thanks For answering that post :)
I really appreciate it:)
Take Care
I gave It a 5/5

That was an excellent write. It was very emotional, and I could feel the sadness and beauty of the words at the same time. These lines fit together so wonderfully:

For being the hope
That nobody else was.

I just felt a sense of satisfaction but longing within those words, and for some reason the simplicity of them touched me deeply. Keep writing hun! You are amazing. 5/5

Again I am sure I am not alone when I say this is a good poem, I find it so intriguing and inspiring to read poems like this...it had a sad beginning but hope permeated through those final stanzas....awesome...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

This is a truly wonderful story through poetry.
This has realy touched me, i wish i could save someone with love the way you described it!
Truly Awesome, great work.

Jon
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This poem thoroughly deserves its high rating. Very well said at the end, it made me get 'that feeling' that I get after reading something great. Excellent job.

P.S. This is something small, but could you vote on "Lonely"? It seems that you forgot to do so, though you left a good comment. Thanks in advance!

-DJ

Thats really sweet! flowed great and was just really good.. nice work

WOW! i adoored this! excellent write! i truly loved itt.. this was such a simple poem, yet the emotions were so complex! every word contained a ton of feelings and the flow was impecable! amazing write! i look forward to seeing more! 5/5

Awwww =D thats such a sad... but sweet poem... and i can relate too...

well written well done!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

If you published a book full of poems. I'd buy it I haven't read a poem of yours I haven't loved so far. Keep Writing.

Hey great poem!, its sad but it has a happy ending which makes me love it even more, great work, love mel

Great poem,! great basis..