Losing each other wont be easy at all
It will crush our world it will make us fall

I absolutely LOVED that part hun. This is a great poem, and I hope that everything works out... keep up the fantastic writing

Thanx for the comment...but i have to admit, that this poem just reminded me so much of my past relationship. i really related to it! keep it up...it was grrrreat!!!

Wow what a poem, I love every bit of it, so well versed I have to say! Great flow and the meaning is awesome & as you commented on mine I know what you mean and believe me I of all people know how it feels!!!!!

Anyway thanks for commenting on mine and keep up the good work hope to read more soon & yeah I will write more regularly now since I have fully recovered from my illness :-)

Love
Ali

Very nice. I can invision your feelings through every line. Good stuff!!

Wow!! this is an amazing poem...i hv gone thro this period & cud totally relate myself..word to word...great work indeed.
congrats!!! u hv been entered in my fav list... lol!!

take care and all the best

If its meant 2 be, it will be! forbidden or not! wow...i really liked that poem! i cant really critizise this one apart from the fact that some dont ryhme and it seemed like u were trying...but it still flowed beautifully

I can relate to this poem absolutely 100%! I'm just stunned at how well you've written this! 5/5. Bravo!

Dearest,
Brit